
Mondays Finish the Story is a weekly flash fiction challenge by Barbara W. Beacham. Barbara provides the picture and the first sentence, and the challenge is to write a story of 100-150 words using the picture and the first sentence. Here is my story.
A Chill – JK.Leahy fiction
“Not knowing what to expect, he made his way into the dark of the forest.” Marcus chuckled to himself, setting off for his morning run. Sun pierced the thick canopy, casting gentle light on his usual track winding through the woods behind his house. He pulled his laces taut as he reminded himself to pick up Elle from her friend’s eighth birthday sleepover to leave her with her mother at ten. As he increased his pace, Marcus thought of his plans for the day, making a special note to pick up Elle.
His daughter had spent the night across town for her best friend’s 8th birthday, but this week she’d be at her mother’s place; Marcus’s ex-wife hated it when he was late. Exhausted, Marcus stopped in a clearing and greedily gulped down the fresh morning air, but despite the heat, he saw something that gave his blood a chill. Hanging from a noose was a rag doll dog with button eyes…his little girl’s dog…
Reblogged this on Notes from An Alien and commented:
Today’s re-blog is a story that will shock………
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Thank you so much Alex.
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Wow! The ending gave me the chills. Great story Joycelin! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. I appreciate your contribution. Be well… ^..^
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Thank you very much Barbara. I enjoy the challenge. Be well yourself and enjoy your weekend. 🙂
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You as well my friend!
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What an incredibly ominous ending, Joycelin! I really hope Elle is safe and well. Good story. 🙂
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Thank you very much Lou.
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Powerful post… Although the last line took me by surprise and scared me. Hope the girl is safe😀
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