This is a unique flash fiction challenge where Barbara W. Beacham provides a new photo and the first sentence of a story each week. The challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words. This challenge runs from Monday to Sunday.
A Friendly Visit – JK.Leahy Short Story©
He thought he found the perfect hiding spot.
Near dad’s cabinet, the curtains moved.
Black feet peeked from under and two green eyes pierced through the curtain. It was a dog. We didn’t have a dog, and neither did Jessy.
My mind went back to yesterday.
“I don’t want you to play with Jessy”
Why not mother?”
“You are eight and he’s 16, and there is something weird about that boy”.
“Like what mother?”
“Those large green eyes – when he grins, I cringe”.
“That’s not fair mother!” I yelled and ran to my room.
Today, my parents went to dad’s work party. Aunty Anne was coming over, but she was late. Jessy stopped by. We played video games and then I went to the toilet. When I returned, Jessy was nowhere to be found…
“Jessy! Where are you?”
“I’m right here”.
The lounge was not big at all. I shivered.
“I’m here stupid! Find me!” Jessy growled.
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Good story, keeps us guessing.
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Thank you very much, glad you liked it.
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Excellent… there is more to Jessie than meets the eye!!!
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🙂 Thank you very much.
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Ooooooh, is Jessy a dog, or a person??
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What do you think ;)? Thank you very much for reading.
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Hmmm, the paws in the pic say dog. But, I’m not reallly sure.
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Hahahaha – we can just make it up..Hahaha. It could be that Jessy has got a party costume on. Perhaps Jessy is not that sinister.;)
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Oh, ho! So Jessy’s tricky, like that, is he??
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Hahaha. I never thought of the ending – I left it to you to decide. All readers must decide, seeing the writer can only provide a 100-150 words.
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Oh, okay. Hmmmm, I wonder what I shall make it be???
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It sounds like Jessy has an interesting ability there! Good story, Jocelyn. 🙂
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LOL thank you Lou – depends how you read it.
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Haha! Jessy is the dog hiding behind the curtain! Cute story.
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AOWWAOWWWW Nice one Joycelin 👍😃
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😀 Thank you very much Chris.
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Does he find Jessy? A burning question. Another good story Jocelin! Thanks for continuing to write for the MFtS challenge and be well… ^..^
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Omg, did Jessy stay there all night? Captivating story!
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Thank you very much for your visit. I really appreciate your comment. I have not thought that far yet. 🙂
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