Picture by Barbara W. Beacham
Mondays Finish the Story by Barbara W. Beacham
This is a unique flash fiction challenge where Barbara provides a new photo each week, and the first sentence of a story. The challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not including the sentence provided. The challenge runs from Monday to Sunday!
Mind Games ©JLeahy
“After losing her head, she realised that the rest of her body was falling apart”, Joe would mimic a psychiatrist.
I sat by the window. The sun warmed my scalp and shadows danced on my hands. In hiding, I watched police take Joe away last night. He would have calmed down, but only he and I knew that; not our new neighbours.
We could have lasted in this abandoned house. If only Joe stayed quiet. My thoughts hurt my head.
“Ava! Ava! Where is your doll?”
Over the low white fence were a lilac doll pantsuit and two doll hands.
I had watched Ava at work yesterday. The toddler first ripped the doll’s head and legs, which she threw towards me. Ava caught me watching her. She laid the doll arms and pantsuit down, and dropping the body, she ran to the house. My eyes salted, thinking how scary I must have looked to her. I must leave before the Johnson Mental Health party arrives.
(150 words excluding the opening quote)
Great story.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much.
LikeLike
That was indeed creepy, Joycelin. That’s one disturbed couple and so is the child. I wonder what the mother will think when she sees the doll. Great description. Well done. — Suzanne
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Suzanne. I appreciate your comment.
LikeLike
Yes Jocelyn I see what you mean by a connection. Nicely done by you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you of reading and welcome!
LikeLike
Really well written and great use of the prompt like that 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Welcome! …and thank you very much.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very interesting story, so much emotion simmering under the surface. Well done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much and welcome!
LikeLike
There’s a lot going on below the surface here. Nicely done.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much. 🙂
LikeLike
Broken lives and broken bodies add up to broken families. A little spooky and sad but great reading. 🙂 ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m glad you enjoyed the reading – yes, it is quite sad.
LikeLike
You are more than welcome. And, unfortunately, lots about life is sad. ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very good! I enjoyed your story and I really liked the ending.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much Priceless Joy. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Creepy tale Joycelin! I like the perspective that you chose in telling this tale. Thanks again for writing for the MFtS challenge and be well… ^..^
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much Barbara, that’s what my son called it, “creepy”.
LikeLiked by 1 person
It was indeed!
LikeLiked by 1 person